Where is this part of me that lacks...?
Where is this everything that is missing...?
When can this void stop being so annoying...?
Why is everything so incomplete...?
No lack of air...
Neither of darkness...
The world is dark enough
No lack of faith...
No lack of rain...
Its already raining so much
Pissing me off...
What is it missing then...?
What is so absent so...?
Why do i ask so much...?
Why can i just conform...
With empty answers...?
So then its incomplete...
Life? Love? Everything...
So then what is this void...
Ignorance is killing me...
And still i dont know whats missing...
A contest entry
- People under 14--Be Deep! by myusikah.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
ooks... umm... just write what u think... :)
Comments
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Ok. So I'm going to rewrite my comment. I really love this, and obviously, people aren't going to be joining this contest anytime soon again. *sigh*. I love the last stanza. It does seem incomplete, because there are no answers to the questions. But in that one last stanza, it has answered them all. Beautiful!
-->pia♫♪
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This is a good vent of feelings. I like this. Incomplete. I like the title too. Thank you for entering! good luck!
-->pia♫♪
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