You come to me in the night
like a virgin sacrifice.
I am hungry to devour your flash,
to let the flames of my fingers
dance across your bronze skin
as I take in the aromatic blossoms
and curves of your body.
I want to taste then slide along you
in a rhythm of real music.
Let the room be filled
with poignant sighs of lust.
The sweet trill of desire.
I will sacrifice you
in sensuous ways.
that will make you
come to me again
desiring more and you
will never be denied.
In a list
A contest entry
- GIVE ME LOVE by Tender wolf.
700 points, ended June 11, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From May 2008 by Amaranthine Lover.
900 points, ended July 1, 57 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm not usually a fan of the sensual, but you did it well with implication and style.
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Ok so its early early morning here and I click on this to read, and it maybe quite cold outside but I am smiling at this. Love, Chez
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BREATH TAKING
such beautiful words flowing from your golden pen...a sacrifice of love and touch...the knowing of the others needs...sighs...niaish so much for sharing with me and for entering
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