The anger spews out of me
Like buckets of bile
I don't know how to stop it
It seeps out of me
Like a poisonous toxin
Slowly it will kill me
Gutting me
From the inside out
I need to seek help
Before the anger takes a hold
And never lets go
A contest entry
- Whatever by crazymomma.
450 points, ended June 9, 2008, 76 entries
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wow.
I really likee the way you worded this.
thanks so much for entering,
good luck. -
I love the way you've put anger across. I know EXACTLY how hard it is to contain it sometimes. I could link myself into that very well - I myself am scared that one day it will totally consume me and there'll be no turning back.
thanks for sharing (:
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This is a kind of, what to say. It just lacks any emotion except anger.
And the poem is a bit too short. Anyways, best of luck -
This is definitely one of your better poems. The anger and raw emotion seeping from your poetic quill are like a punch to the gut... Seriously. We should really collab sometime. I betcha it'd be killer! Bravo!
Laura x
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if you feel like that the nget some help hun.. before you hurt someone...great job!
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Anger really is like poison. A friend told me that a grudge is like letting someone live rent free inside your head. I like this. I am not an angry person but I know several who are
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