Peaches Peaches
What a name
I honestly think
It's pretty lame
Was your mom on drugs
When you were born?
Was she thinking you'd have a career
Doing today's hottest porn?
It suites you really
Because your pretty much a whore
Fucking my so called boyfriend
Just begging him for more
That's fine you can have him
He isn't no prize
Eventually you will see that
It's him you will despise
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Comments
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This is good but I like part 1 better more anger still this is awesome thank you for entering and good luck
-♥Amy♥ -
hehe
Wow this made me laugh. peaches interesting i have a cousin with that name and shes kinda on the ify side hehe. this is very well written and i liked it alot. my favorite part was when you said "Was your mom on drugs
When you were born?
Was she thinking you'd have a career
Doing today's hottest porn"
thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
..<3..
Shelly -
Hee hee. I knew someone like this too. I liked the way you said was your mom on drugs. Peaches sounds like a nickname not a given name.
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