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Generational

 

 

 

          Depraved, so dilapidated, degenerate,

 

  why hasn't maintenance come through?

 

 

         (no work nor repairs

          commence when it all returns to

          dispair.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Really like this!! How can the dilapidated be regenerated when it will still only hold the depths of despair in the walls!! Fab take


  • sheltered
    May 31, 2008
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    Dispair... nice pun on disrepair i think?