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My Lady's House





Deep in sorrow's lands
lays a creaky old home.

Over run by the forest
it leaves no one alone...


....Whispers.



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20 words

A contest entry

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    eek.. it's like the house is whispering out to everyone near.. not giving them any peace.. spooky!!
    Great write!!


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 31, 2008

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    wow... amazingly beautiful......! i love this... i love this... oh did i say that twice hehe.. thats because i just love this..... thanks for sharing and gooooooood luck in contest...!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 31, 2008

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    oh how do u manage to give me a chill in so litte words hehehe, awesome...Love it




    Cin


  • sheltered
    May 31, 2008
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    Is it just me
    or does everyone
    love an uttered whisper?


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Slightly chilly.

    Well writ &
    Be well.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Very clever! Spooooky! Love the rhyme Best of luck!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    oohh I love this.. a creaky old home.. hmm sounds nice.

    Love your take on the prompt, lover

    good luck in the contest

    anne

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