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A lonely house

When darkness overwhelms  
everyone is gone
only walls telling a story
of a faded house
still holding on
to existence..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    May 31, 2008

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    Response:

    Darkness can only overwhelm the relative
    in which then the relative is subdued
    all faces gone
    accept the one of their absence
    which yet testifies to their existence
    one is now distanced from...

    As the house of inner and outer fades
    All light arises, to and from all inner and outer.

    This is what came my friend, I can only hope it meets you well.

    Sol


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Yes.. I bet there are many abandoned homes that hold dark memories still clinging to them!! Felt the darkness in this.. gripped me!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt.


    Be Well.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    Yes! Nice work here