Watching your chamber,
memories flash by.
Each one
stinging a little deeper.
Shaking,
I pull the trigger.
Sweet tasting
revenge.
Shaking,
I pull the trigger.
Author notes
20 words
Credit Artist:
http://32tsunami.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Farm-42016751
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie.... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 31, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ohhh. it's like you're looking into the windows.. remembering horrid things.. seeing the person in there.. and going in for the kill. Chilling!! Love it
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This rended movied images.
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oooooooo wow.... i would love to get revenge..... and you make it sound like so much fun.... hehe... thanks sharing and gooooooooooooooooood luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You make revenge sound so yummy! Great Job
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