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Click.



 Watching your chamber,
    memories flash by.
 Each one

      stinging a little deeper.


Shaking,
I pull the trigger.



    Sweet tasting
    revenge.

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  • Maldronah
    October 3
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    Hmmm...

    Click?
    or Bang?
    Lady?
    or TIger...


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Ohhh. it's like you're looking into the windows.. remembering horrid things.. seeing the person in there.. and going in for the kill. Chilling!! Love it


  • sheltered
    May 31, 2008
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    This rended movied images.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 31, 2008

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    oooooooo wow.... i would love to get revenge..... and you make it sound like so much fun.... hehe... thanks sharing and gooooooooooooooooood luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Map of Stars silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    You make revenge sound so yummy! Great Job

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