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Nest

bird's nest over door
flutters of great excitement
anxiety grows

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  • azure85 gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    bird's nest over door
    flutters of great excitement
    anxiety grows

    Very interesting haiku, the sight of the bird's nest, and the excitement-it could be anyone! The bird or the other residents below, a nice haiku, thank you so much.


  • DogFish silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    who is the intruder here
    and who is the homeowner?


  • individuality gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, i like the ending here especially as i see this as nature brings a smile but because the nest is over the door it has to be removed.