World War II air raids
run to the shelters' darkness
who is kissing my sis?
A contest entry
- History Relived by Note The Sarcasm.
1050 points, ended June 14, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Smile... all the while...
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That probably did happen a lot, young people looking for some privacy and getting it where they could. It was a pretty romantic time in a way.
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Wonderful little haiku, it's hard to say so much with less space and you have managed beautifully. I would say sis gets a piece of cake for making the best of a sticky situation! Kudos!
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a good poem penned, this brought a smile to my face as it starts off quite serious then has a lovely light ending to the piece.
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haha. I like the last line. It puts a mildly humerous tone to the underbelly of a really serious subject. Great job. oh, and you get cake. A big piece of marble cake with tons of white frosting and hundreds of colorful little sprinkles for writing about WWII.
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YAY for cake!
Thank you... true haiku story! 
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