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Insanity's Edge

Well, hello there my dear friend

My loathed enemy which I now meet again

 

Sound of body and soul, but not of mind

Yet in this, peace and tranquility are what I find

 

Calm and still; no time to tell

Yet part of me feels trapped in a personal hell

 

No padded room, nor jacket straight

But insanity's release I still await

 

There are moments when I've seen the other side

Still I fear the things that in insanity reside

 

But here I am; staring off sanity's edge

One question remains; do I jump off the ledge?

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  • Dangerousparable silver member
    October 22, 2008
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    if you jump you'll only feel the pleasure once


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    I can see the heart is in indifferent flow revealing the truth, perhaps bitter truth of the life..thanks for sharing such a deep verse..well done....