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I'm OK when

im ok when i look in your eyes
im ok when u say everything will b alright
im ok when u stand next 2 me
im ok when u kiss me
im ok when u hold me tight
im ok cause everything will b alright

r u ok ?

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  • CarnalNineTailedFox
    May 31

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    this is a very beautiful write! you have penned your emotions beautifully! i wish you the best of luck with your poetry!
    CarnalNineTailedFox

    • ukilledme
      June 11
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      thanku

      so much i really put my emotions out on this poem !!!

  • Rovingone gold member
    May 31
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    How sweet and musical. Just like a song. It's so heartwarming.