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[ Haiku ] Blossoms


her garden-
I pick flowers
no longer in her hair



My Haiku Poetry

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cant help it...imma romantic

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  • azure85 gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    her garden-
    I pick flowers
    no longer in her hair

    A very pretty haiku, and lovely set of images. It is a very romantic haiku, thank you so much.


  • myron silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    wonderful

    this is a wonderful haiku. i love it. the layout is a little strange, but that's ok if that's the way you want to place the lines.

    I may be reading this haiku in a way contary to your intentions, but i see the poet picking up flowers which have fallen from his lover's hair. I love that!

    best wishes in the contest,
    myron.


    • Malabu
      June 1, 2008
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      Though I see this picture as myself picking those flowers from her hair...your thoughts are just as well...
      as for layout... Ive discovered there are no set rules for layout...Ive come across Haiku in sentence form...just as effective...some of my fragment and ahh moments can be reverted either to the first line or last... as in this ku...thanks for dropping by myron...always appreciated


  • Candy6
    May 31, 2008
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    Nice haiku