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and excels ----------------

Know the trend of Saturn.
behaving odd
and thriving  on your impatience.
HE excels highly
when you are dragged down
to lazy terms

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Lazy Saturday PIF

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    June 2, 2008

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    This is perfect if the prompt was "Lazy Saturday", but sadly it was "heartbroken betrayal".

    Thank's for entering!