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another futile love poem

Raw ink

   becoming lines,

      forming shapes,

            that resemble letters;

                       words, conveying emotions,

                  best left,

               unwritten,

          unspoken,

      unthought,

unfelt.

CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is most welcome.

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    June 1

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    very beautifully written poem,
    i like this alot,
    your love poems always make me happy,
    i love you, all my love,
    kitty