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basic geometery

they form

perfect circles

around a fire,

smiling, laughing,

talking,

 

 

things

completely foreign

to me.

 

a minor arc

incapable of fitting

those circles.

CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is most welcome.

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    June 1

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    aww huni this is beautiful,
    ill for sure buy your book
    once again im glad to see your poetry,
    it lightens my heart,
    love you, all my love,
    kitty


  • Flutterby--x
    May 31

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    Sweetheart, it seems as though you're missing out on alot.
    This poem described an outcast and you're not.

    You'll be okay sweety, because I believe in you.

    ily.

    • Perdu
      May 31
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      aw, thank you, sweetie
      I may not be an outcast here, but irl, I most definately am, lol.

      ily2