Whispers on the phone, in the next room'
intimate laugh, I thought was ours only.
"I have to help this friend, sugar, see you tomorrow."
Then,she was gone, so was my heart.
A contest entry
- Lazy Saturday PIF by ShadowsMidnightRose.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Penned very nicely, and a defifent twist to the prompt.
Well done!
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Thankyou for your comment. Interesting play on words, twist with the poem's title being dagger. That's a thought, a twist of the dagger when she lyed and left.
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Word are indeed very sharp daggers...easliy breaking ones heart if not with lies--with actions!
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