See you really had me going
Yea you're pretty damn slick
Had me feeling sorry for you
Falling into that damn trick
Made an ass out of myself
Defended you when you lied
Shouted my trust to the world
Then realized you left my side
I'm so pissed that you did this
How could you turn out two-faced
Wasted all my time around you
But your ex couldn't be replaced
I talked to you, lied for you
Lost time and friends for you
Threw away dollars and dimes for you
But after-all, did you listen
Did you take my advice
You ignored me and now he beats you
Goddamn that must be nice
I showed you what deserve
What a relationship should be
But you ran back to him
But no matter, now I see
You don't want the best
What did I expect
You didn't want what I could offer
Not even my respect
Ha-ha, you really had me going.
A contest entry
- Fuel for the Fire by GypsyEyes.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
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900 points, ended June 2, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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wow so full of emotion and i can really relate great job :]
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well damn! this was really to the point! love it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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