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A New Start

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I try each night before I go to bed
to sit and write some words of love to you,
I have to say the thoughts inside my head
for after all this time, my love is true.

Though many lonely months we’ve been apart
we've had to follow in our separate ways,
to spend our lives within the others heart
with sorrow always there to fill our days.


We know the meeting we are longing for
will put an end to loneliness and grief,
to travel on our journey and explore
not hide within the shadows like a thief.

Tomorrow sees the start for me and you,
please walk with me, our lives begin anew.

 

 

 

 

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  • chasingwhiterabbits
    June 20, 2008
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    Aww this is so sweet. Beautifully written, and I just love sonnets.

    Thank you for entering!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Aww how wonderful!! A new start is always a great adventure in love!


  • Gwenevere
    June 1, 2008

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    Sad and beautiful all at the same time.All the lonelinesss will be worth it when you become one.Sometimes hiding in shadows is the only way until the strengh is present to allow you to make the desicion to throw caution to the wind for the sake of love, Ros


  • arafura gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    Well written and beautifully expressed. Good luck my friend!


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Its sad and beautiful. And is a bad thing that as I read this the person we were talking about earlier sent me a text message. Its beautiful Ms Sue.


  • Cannonsfire
    May 31, 2008
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    This is softly sad but beautifully done. Love, C

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