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A Passport Cerulean

Missing image
Soul cleaves to dreams of azure ocean sanctuaries,
held in the mind as images upon a calendar,
being the source of hope for escape
when chained by work to a cubicle.

Immersed in the stunning watery tapestry,
schools of sunburst fish circle in spellbound invitation
as a sea turtle floats across the stage performing a mesmerizing ballet.

Lost in the pure serenity magic,
holding the euphoria of a passport cerulean,
spirit drinking the rapture from this paradise marine.

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  • Brazos silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Through your words, I could almost visualize the pic without it being there. Has almost a sensual feel to it, very despcriptive, beautiful imagery.

    Sigh...there is always somewhere we'd rather be than the old cubicle, eh?




  • stavykm gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Beautiful

    THis is just stunning. Yes this is exactly how I feel and when I finally actually get there LOL, You did a fabulous job on imagery, poetic expression as well as flow. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie