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a perfect alibi in the year 3000

D. DOLL, FORSAKEN, ALIBI, CONTEST, SPACESHIP

melting secrets kept hidden from forsaken eyes,
and yet it's a perfect alibi,
In the year 3000 destitude is owed only to the willing,
distilling all thoughts brewing a contest all to your own,
get up and leave your doll jump in the spaceship and find a new world
our new home,

hiding the smiles like eyes streching for miles,
a perfect alibi in the year 3000
beneath the piles all those condecending trials,
the perfect alibi for the year 3000

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D. DOLL, FORSAKEN, ALIBI, CONTEST, SPACESHIP
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Not your conventional poet but a solo musician also

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  • Penz gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Is this a song? Some lines repeat and I can only wish we have audio so I can hear it! Good luck in the contest.

    Anyway, you say your a solo musician, what instruments do you play? Or are you a vocalist?