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Freshly Written

Why make a contest allowing poems of all kinds?
All this does is hinder uniqueness,
It gives people points for not using their minds,
And eventually it brings forth their inner weakness.

'Anything Goes,' such a simple phrase.
Yet so disasterous when pre-writes are allowed,
So many poets are in a pre-writing daze
And regurgitate poems of which they are proud.

Normally this is not all too bad,
Except when this pre-write has been used ten times,
I re-read the same poems, and, frankly, i'm mad
That people can win repeatedly with the same lines.

I, of course, know my own hypocrisy,
For I, too, have re-used my writes,
I have conformed to the prestigious pre-write bureaucracy,
And my lack of creativity has soared to new heights.

With these cheap rhymes I have attempted to hoard
Point after point like they were cold hard cash.
But, frankly, now I've been getting quite bored
Of my same old lines and cliche rhyming trash.

So here you are, my friend, a fresh new write for you.
Read slowly and enjoy it while it lasts,
For nowadays, fresh writes number few
And the sea of pre-writes has become quite vast.

I do not dare halt this uniqueness so
I don't lose my muse, I must write fast,
And hope that my creativity flow won't slow,
I pray this fresh write won't be my last.

A contest entry

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  • toomysterious
    June 6, 2008

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    I loved your wonderful tongue in cheek write. I agree on all levels, can we say "on the fence",
    though I agree
    it encourages us not to think
    its a level,
    to which I've been known to sink. Congrats on your bronze trophy.


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    June 6, 2008
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    Yes. Thats true.


  • Note The Sarcasm
    May 31, 2008
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    Once again great write. I really liked this one. Good luck in the contest.


  • deep space
    May 31, 2008

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    I liked the funny edge you gave this and you are so right on so many of your points in your poem,well done and best wishes


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    May 31, 2008

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    haha. this poem is great. i totally know what you mean about those type of contests! great write.

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