you told me
you would..
you left me
and you didn't
but still
you hold me
as i restrain away
a breaking embrace
Author notes
relate to those feelings.. i am feeling a version of it
A contest entry
- Lazy Saturday PIF by ShadowsMidnightRose.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please? and thank you...
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Congratulations on the bronze. It was well deserved.
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well
It seems that to be a captive to another or a feeling that one cannot escape from can be very damaging. Freedom releases pain
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heh ya.. you got it spot on
nice aim...
thanks for the comment
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Wonderful
Terrific take on the prompt. Great images. Best of luck in the contest.
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This was very interesting, and extreamly one of a kind.
Welcome to the finals! -
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thank you
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