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When I Am Not In A Mood

When I am not in a mood.
Do you want to know what I mean?
  I hope you do because I am telling you anyways.
When I am not in a mood I am not in a mood but people make me to do what they want it's so stupid I am not good for what they want in me.
 When I am not in a mood you try to me in a mood and trying to be funny. Sorry it's not helping me so you can just leave now because I am not in a mood to have a bad day now. I am not in a mood to be with anyone right now.
I need to dry my tears.
I need sometime to be myself I just can't think I just rink.
 Oh my gosh am I being so mean? O well because I want you to understand me so when I am not in a mood so don't put me in a weird lookin' mood because I don't need that right now.
If you want to put me to laughter do it but it won't work with me so you can just leave me.
I wonder if you undestood me because I am not in a da mood.
I am not in a mood so if you don't leave I will leave so good-bye.  
I will say my good-bye's and leave so why do I need to be a good girl when I could be a bad girl?
 When I am not in a mood where is the love?
Where is the milk and honey? When is the island of milk and honey?
  Where is a mood that you putted in my life?
I wish my mood will be alright.
I wish my mood will be alright so if I am not in a mood will you put me in a good mood?
  Good mood?
  When I get in a mood then I am in a mood but if I am not in a mood I am not in a mood so you should just leave before you get hurt.
When I am not in a mood.

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Written December 27th, 2003

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  • BitterDreamer
    December 27, 2003
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    sorry, I don't get this..I'm sure it means someting to you, but the way you put it into works was just out right confusing...but its cool how you expressed your self, even though me or anyone else can't understand it! lol
    ~BitterlySweet~

  • d635p
    December 27, 2003
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    I didn't like it very much.. but thats just a personal opinion.. anything that you like is wonderful

  • wonderkat
    December 26, 2003
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    um, this was just sort of confusing.