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Up and Down






Let the sliver of lust
run up your back
with my caress
as kisses
slide salaciously
down to your paradise.







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  • AngelWithDarkWings gold member
    June 1

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    even though you did write this before the prompt was up.. I must say it fits the prompt quite well. excellent job on this.

    good luck

    k


  • KayJay46 gold member
    June 1

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    I can see where you're headed with this erotic write (yes, pun intended LOL). Wickedly delicious... well done.
    Ken

  • azlyn gold member
    May 31
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    MMMMMMMMMM....YES!!!


    Az


  • solo wisp gold member
    May 31

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    Hello ... you do realize the prompt isn't up yet ... Or perhaps are you jumpstarting and adjusting the poem when the prompt is visible? *curious*

    Good luck in the contest!

    Steve