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Betrayal

Down in the dumps, heartbroken
by the way you did betray
Those nasty words you have spoken
turned bright sunshine into dull gray

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Hurting

In a list

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    June 2, 2008

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    This is really good! I just wish you would have not used the word betray. But I did appreciate the excellent ryhming...

    Thank's for entering!