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Tanka







Cutting the rose
I planted for her.
I've no use
for the blossom,
no need for the thorns.









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  • only1love4ever
    June 2

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    Only1love4ever-Reply

    You know that is quite unique and there are so many different ways of percieving this poem. It could be used in many different places to explain many different things. As to say it was a relationship, then it would be that you have no longer any use for your "lover" and no need to put up with her "trouble" or you could just be speaking of a rose, possibly of a dying rose, or a bad relationship with a family member or friend or even an animal.

    Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
    I truly enjoyed it.
    It was most entertaining!
    Have a great day.
    God Bless.
    Good luck.
    ~Only1love4ever