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Waterfire

Elegance - wrath dancing merrily - coaxingly.
Yet contained to an insignificant stretch
of man made allowance - imprisoned.
Sparkling - reflecting off ideas of lifelong cheer.
Carried by the lax current of a fire lit date
to glow upon promising couples.
Potential - the possibility of reaching an uncharred plateau.
Seemingly impossible, such an idea of euphoria.
Oxygen - assisting the fire's slight trance
as it sways this way and that.
Such a controlled substance - when on an island
reluctant to grow in fear of disaster.
Oxygen - the fuel to our flame - embrace.
Let it lift you - embers soar - ignite dry land.
Opportunities - expand at all angles - encouraged.
Angel, opening green eyes - amber glows radiate.
Cognate eyes unite - plump lips combine.
It's a night for the ages.
Fire with water - opposites attract.


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  • jasminerose
    June 2, 2008

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    Opposites do attract and make for a very exciting relationship of any kind
    Love how you wrote this.. as your imagery grabs a hold of the reader and the passion of your pens dancing across the page in excitement!!
    Excellent penning Josh!!
    Linda