Did you dream this would happen to you?
I'm gonna be the nightmare in your mind
Twisting each possible memory you've kept inside
I'm gonna make it all mine
Take your crazy life
Make it unimaginable
Create something worth the while
You can try all you want
But you can't squirm away, love
You're mine for the taking
Mine to love
Break you like no tomorrow
Don't care how loud you scream
You're gonna be mine tonight
Forever and for always
Nothing you do can stop me
'Cause it just makes me
Go faster and faster
Stop trying to leave, dear
You know it'll pass in time
So stop all your whining
See you tomorrow evening
Remember...
Your worst nightmare
Awaits...
Author notes
I am not FOR rape...
I wrote this and didn't even realize until I was close to done that it sounded like it.
>_>
Uhm...*cough* Comment please?
Comments
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Holy crap! That gave me the heebeejeebees...
...seriously....I dont even know what to say....and I NEVER shut up, so thats quite the task.
Powerful and VERY hard hitting...
I gotta get outta here, seriously that creeped me out.
(which means... Great job )
Jamie
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It's Brutal. I would end up writing a second poem from the victims point of view. Vivid Imagery. My favorite line of this piece "I'm gonna be the nightmare in your mind
Twisting each possible memory you've kept inside" Its powerful and brilliant. Good Write, (if not a little scary)
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My my
You read my mind!
I would enjoy making another at their point of view.
Wouldn't bother me at all.
Look out for it, okay? :]
And thanks for the comment. I am glad someone appreciates my strange art...
Even if it's about something rather...crude.
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