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Vengeance Mine

I will avenge you,
This I swear.
Those who stole my heart,
My bond, my air,
Shall taste my blade
Cause eyes eternal stare.
The truth will be told
To your unborn heir.
Of father’s fire,
And love so fair.

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Artist: Saiman
http://Saimain.deviantart.com/art/Beautiful-Ruin-69959378

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  • Aerden gold member
    June 22, 2008
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    No critique--I just like this!


  • sailor ptolema
    June 4, 2008
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    a lovely little revenge poem!
    great rhyme, great form!
    poweful words!
    thanks for entering!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    May 31, 2008
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    This is beautifully written. The last 4 lines really stand out. Wonderful!