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Underwater Creatures

As the turtle swims
As the dolphins jump
An underwater sea world
In your very own eyes
It feels as if your there
Swimming right by the soulful creatures
They swim so graceful
I wonder what it would be like to be a fish

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i want to go!

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  • Brazos silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    Very nice write, you captured the beauty of the undersea world very well!


  • stavykm gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    ME TOO

    They seem so happy and free. They swim so peaceful in the beautiful blue ocean waters. You did a beautiful job with imagery and emotions. What a wonderful feeling to just see this beauty with your own eyes.
    Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie