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Turdles Fish and Me

You may say at four

  It is time for tea!

I say turtles, fish and me.

  It is after work

Time to strip

  And snorkel with my friends.

 

They are my babies.

  These are my love.

If I could switch,

  I would become one,

Swimming and visiting

  All day long.

 

To me they are the best.

  The best company.

They show me their hiding spots,

  And treasures the have found.

How they keep swimming around.

  They each are a treasure to me.

 

 

  5-31-2008

 

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  • Bee gee silver member
    June 10, 2008
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    this different

    this is differeent and some how sillly.i guess i have to figure you out.lol


  • stavykm gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Sounds Fun

    Oh yes they certainly are a treasure. I loved the imagery and joyful emotions expressed in your poem. You did a fabulous job and I really enjoyed being a part of your poem. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Brazos silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Instead of tea, take to the sea! I like it! Not much interest in seeing a tea bag swim around in a cup, lol.Good job on your write here.

    Brazos