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Silent Deception

Waves lapping at rocks
Serene scene of deception
Storm release fury

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  • sailor ptolema
    June 2, 2008

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    oo, I like this a lot!
    especially line 2...they ocean can indeed be very deceptive


  • azure85 gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Waves lapping at rocks
    Serene scene of deception
    Storm release fury

    A good description of the ocean and it's fury, thank you so much for your haiku.


  • ConfusedViolet14
    June 1, 2008
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    **cute**