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Hidden

Deep within the caverns cold
Within the dark recesses
Hidden there within a heart
And ivy's emerald tresses

There lies a trembling heartbeat
The shadow of an age
A passion lies in secret
'Neath a cloth of tears and rage

A warrior once had seen it
Had grasped within his hand
The burning jewel of fire
That lay in hidden land

But, lo, the jewel has fallen
Lost to time and place
Slipping through his fingers
From his tightly held embrace

And now within the caverns cold
Within the dark recesses
There lies a broken ruby heart
'Neath the ivy's emerald tresses

Waiting for the warrior
Who once had felt its flame
Perhaps forever 'twill be waiting
For his heart to come and claim

So within the darkest caverns
Hidden deep in dark recesses
A secret lies in silence
'Neath the ivy's emerald tresses

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  • azlyn gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    My dear and talented little Sister...You simply amaze me...I bow to your wonder and soft poetic grace!!!


  • Frodofan silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    Oh, very pretty and romantic. It is a very original poem and reminded me greatly of the silmarils! Very very nice!


  • ramemareh
    May 31, 2008

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    Such a bittersweet tale of gains and losses. Quilled in the flavor, which can only be concocted by you.. Very good..