as the dawning sun arises
amidst the mountainous waterfalls
enchanting beyond imaginations
mists caress my spirit
[in awe of such beauty]
visions of intense wonder
as far as one can see
a palette of natural graces
painted with His blessed hands
just as miraculous as the dawning sunrise
prismatic reflections spiral
like a rainbow on a heavenly staircase
slowly awakening from slumber
[souls peacefully charged]
ready to embrace each new day
Author notes
OPTION # 3. Titles
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A contest entry
- Various Prompts by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended June 13, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Congrates On The HM.
You did an excellent job sis as always!
Brother Timothy
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very creative piece I like the soothing almost dreamlike feeling to it. soft imagery and the word play is almost as teasing to the eye as a rainbow itself.
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