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My Life Below

As I glide through the ocean floor,
all that makes me happy and more.
To see the beauty of the blue,
it's existence is complete and true.
Around the turtles and fish I pirouette,
longing for their silouettes.
Snorkling is the way I go,
I'd like to spend my entire life below.

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  • stavykm gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    ME TOO

    I'd like to spend my entire life below. YES, I love snorkling with the beautiful fish and the sea turtles. What a beautiful poem with imagery and good feelings of being on vacation!! I loved the rhyme too. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Brazos silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    It must be nice down there with all our finny friends [and others]. I'll have to try it someday. Happiness is where you find it, and you certainly seemed to have found yours under the surface.

    And, you've written about it very well also.

    Brazos


  • deep space
    May 31, 2008
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    wow you should go proper diving it must be fantastic,like a world totally alien to us,amazing