RED
is the sky with the setting sun.
It is the blood streaming down;
the dirty deeds I’ve done.
ORANGE
is the sign of a growing flame.
It is the fire inside of me,
for I’m the one to blame.
YELLOW
is the lightening streaking the sky.
It is the golden glimmer,
that has gone from my eyes.
GREEN
is the ongoing life around me.
It will still be around,
even after my soul is free.
BLUE
is the sky of hope,
which will fade to black,
when you see me hung from the rope.
VIOLET
is the wild jasmines bursting to life,
which will soon be lost,
to this beautiful, shimmering knife.
Comments
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I loved this!! I even read it out loud to my sister!
You did a great job hun. I love how it still rhymed, still keeping all the colors.
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Wow I am speechless. I really like this one that is for sure. It is very moving. Thanks for writing such a wonderful piece and letting us all read it. Keep it up!
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I would have never thought to be so deeply creative... within the colors of the rainbow.. were the contrast betteen darkness and light flashes inside your words....
Well done ~
This was amazing
Blair <3
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What a beautiful rainbow that is.
You're an amazing writer with amazing talent.
This is is dark but gorgeous.
Wonderful flow and very unique idea.
<33
~IvoRy
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