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Pry Me







I love the feel of cold steel
as you try to move me.

Pry me from my perfunctory
habits always done in haste.

Neither of us are malleable
and will not bend

so the metal
must fit into fissures
and separate us.

that we may somehow
learn to come together.

I make you do it
it is my way
of assuring me
of your love.





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  • Kelli Marie
    May 31

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    oh, this is a great take on the contest prompt. I like where you took it. Nice imagery. A well written piece of poetry. Best of luck in the contest.
    Kelli