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A Better Road



We kissed
and let
her go...

For she had
a better road
to go in front.


So many ahead
awaiting her
journey to
be reunited.

Parents, children
and grandchildren,
sister and brother
already there amongst
the clouds and Angels.

Jesus blessed her illness
and she passed fast.
He took her once all said
goodbye to Betty.

We had just celebrated
Mothers Day so special
and ironed out so many
bruises  in long weekends
this past two years.
Playing her favorite game
UNO and dominoes.

The best to this story is
a CD was playing the past
two days as Mom laid asleep
of the holy spirit at work.
My brother made a copy for
himself which is married to
a Wicca.


Mom's pastor during the
service asked if we would see
Betty ever again now that she is
dancing with all her friends.
So Matt's wife asked how far is to
that church, he said 5-10 minutes.

Always, his glory comes through
all things. My heart has been broken
for the past five days, but after the
burial I can only smile and have tears
of joy that her burial brought my brother
and his wife to there knees of submission.

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  • Sandygram silver member
    June 26

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    Beautiful and Heartfelt

    Dear Tamara, My thoughts and prayers are with you my friend. Many Blessings to you and your family

    Sandy

  • Twins 4 me
    May 31

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    Very beautiful and touching words. The very beginning of this piece is very powerful. I feel the tragedy and triumph. Well done!!!!


  • Sonja silver member
    May 31
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    We kissed
    and let
    her go...

    For she had
    a better road
    to go ahead.
    ~
    Love and the whole life in the only few lines of poetry. It is always so hard to say good bye to dear ones, part of our soul and heart and the most beautiful thing is to accept the truth. All who lives in our heart will live forever.
    ~Sonja~


    • Ladybug
      May 31
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      very well stated, and yes in my heart she will be held and treasured.
      thank you for your visit and kindness.
      always

      Tamara