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[ lone eagle ]

lone eagle
soars home
to its nest

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    You have the idea of good haiku, and i can see this but it seems too simplistic too common. Not trying to be negetive but I feel you have the right idea but would be better served to be more surprising
    it is a fine line to walk making a short consise image filled haiku and it is truly an opinon based idea of what is good or not. I feel in my humble opinion that if you put a surprise in it somehow it would be truly awesome!!!!