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Fire's Light

In my cabin

  Alone one night.

Finally the fire was showing live.

  From the center

She came to me.

  Her beauty stayed

The whole night through.

  Warming through and through.

 

 

  5-31-2008

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  • mcheadle
    June 14, 2008
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    glad you enjoyed this...mac

  • mcheadle
    June 14, 2008
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    glad you enjoyed this...mac


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    verrrry relaxing read, Love the wording and - whole thing, brilliant job thanks and gooooood luck ^.^