Will it be here
were we will find the answers
among the thousands of others who look so lost
Will it be here
were we will live together in happiness
among the hundreds who have tried and now become bitter
Will it be here
were we will love without passing judgement
among the few that judge our love openly
Or will we find the place and time
for answers so needed
for happiness so welcomed
and for love to stay so refreshed with each passing night
Author notes
idk. I was reading another poets poetry and I felt inspired to write. And the only thing I can't make up my mind about is the last 4 lines should stay or go.....tell me what u think should happen
05/31/2008
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
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i really like this one i say the last 4 lines should stay. but good write


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Thanks

~Lorissa~
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