deep nothings
dissolving
into transparent residue
with each step
being drawn
into
a silent reality
where shadows
inhibit every
corner
and sleepless nights
are passed
in quiet innocence
Author notes
title prompt~
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Comments
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hmmm creative and subtle but im not totaly sure if I love it or not GOOD JOB
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this took my breath away.
"with each step
being drawn
into
a silent reality"
brilliant lines...x
the last stanza was beautiful.
i loved how you gave this poem a subtle & gentle feel to it, very appropriate for the title.
thank you and best of luck
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