Writing down
My own meaningless
Little words
Constructing
My own attention
Inducing little stage
My own epic drama
My own scripted life
In this crumpled trashed paper
Send you the letter
I sealed it with tears
Of maybe you'll read it
Maybe you'll read it
And reconsider every mistake
That I have done
Every heartache I have inflicted
I know from the start it was shaky
My frustration
And flaws came over me
That I may never be perfect
For you
My insecurities rash
A nice setting heading
For disaster
Where what you felt came last
All I have deep inside is to overcome
My stupidity
My selfishness
My blindness
My regret
Of having you as an option
Rather than a priority
Now the tides have turned
And I believe
I truly believe
That I have changed
For you
For us
This desires are powerful intentions
Of redemption
Of reconciliation
Because despite
All the hell
I have put you through
In the deepest depths of my heart
I Love you
Author notes
optio 3, What I feel now! I was throwing some old stuff, and I bump into a picture of my ex, and made me remember about everything that she has made me realize, i was an ass back then, and she fixed me up ^^, thus leading me to need her, and well this is what i remembered a portion of the letter i wrote to her, i hope you like it, ^^,
A contest entry
- Song by Shya.
690 points, ended June 20, 2008, 34 entries
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Comments
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Oh...
This made me cry. I can relate to this... you've put everything down so clearly and beautifully, and this poem's touched my heart. Thanks for entering my contest.
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wait, here are some little clappy people 
this piece is cool, it deserves them
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This is really really good YOu should do well inthe contest
Sam -
WOW!
This was really sweet! Very touching and it came straight from your heart! There were so many lovely metaphors used with great depth and meaning! This poem held raw, honest, true and powerful emotions/feelings! This brought this poem to a whole new level. it brought this poem, writeen with such simplicity, alive! This was amazing... too wonderful to be described in mere words!
It's funny how a person, or love, can make someone change so much! Wonderful job... keep writing kays! >.<
~RANJI!
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