Hell?
There is no Hell...
Of fire and brimstone.
I believe in the Devil.
Yes,
But the Hell we may end up in
Is determined by what we do here.
Hell is a Heaven to some
Whom believe it is all sin and pleasure.
But these pleasures are the Devil's playgoround
He is always in control.
Its like selling your soul here
To get a ticket to his realm.
Why ride a long black train
To end up only in misery?
As related in the song,
By Josh Turner...
The train we ride here,
Determines our fate.
So
Make your choice!
I'd rather live a live of love and happines...
Joy, laughter and smiles all around
than
Sell my soul to Hell and misery!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Quickie - About Hell by Dreamana.
300 points, ended May 31, 2008, 9 entries
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We all have our veiw point on what hell is and isn't I like this poem because I agree with you we all do things in are life and its determined if what we did in life is good or bad... Plus I think also at the time of death that if were sorry for what we done in life determines if we should go to hell.. Nice poem one of my favorites..
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