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Me, Him, Her

He loved me once
told me all the things
I wanted to hear
held me like that

I was young and scared
I through him away
I missed him so

now he tell the things
I want to hear
to her
now he holds her like that
now he loves her

my heart stops in my chest with a painful tug
like it may at any minute just be riped out
I find I cant breath when they kiss
when they hug I feel the ghost of his arms around me 
find my self shaking in the cold of the bright sun

he loved me once could we find love again?
can a dog find the long buried bone?
a squirrel his winter stash of food?

or will I go on watching wishing hoping?
will the dog dig for all the day and night?
will the squirrel die in the harsh cold days of winter?

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  • softball19girl32
    June 21, 2008

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    In the 2nd part.. Through is supposed to be threw. in the 3rd.. tell should be tells.. Awee so is this just random or about someone?


  • HereComesTheSun
    June 1, 2008

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    he loved me once could we find love again?
    can a dog find the long buried bone?
    a squirrel his winter stash of food?
    i absolutly love those line
    great jobb