fingers traveling like feather
across rising land of skin
where time will track nothing
but test of tips
trying to circumnavigate sighs
stumbling yet hand to hold
to clutch, to lead and guide
to valleys known and sheltered coves
in which to lap, like tidal pools
that rise to reach its lover sea
and air to cross, and fire spewing
all to reach one end
a well-led return to
to its beloved beckoner
again and again and again
Author notes
prompt: Walk with Me Tomorrow
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie...Big Points....Quote Inspired by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended June 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This just makes me want to close my eyes and picture the places you mention. Thank you for the entry. Love, C
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ty, C......sometimes there is such gentleness in that reach...sometimes.
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Beautiful. I love how subtly you say what you want to say. Well done.
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ty, stranger. I appreciate your comments.
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"trying to circumnavigate sighs"
I failed. Sighhh...
Dammit. I don't have time for this ache today. Ehhh, who am I kidding? You couldn't be "slightly sensual?" if you tried, my Friend. You merely define it for the rest of us mortals. Good luck in Chez's contest, Sweetie. 
Wanda
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lol...well, sometimes it can be raw and real..but othr times, I temper it......hee hee temper being the operative word..... as you will see.
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OKAY, so you have given fuller expression to the phrase "rock my world!" Beautiful imagery with a creative expression. Just gorgeous.
Loved it!
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aw, ty dear heart.
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