Floating under freedom's brow
lashes fall in hues of blue.
Swaying into crystal dreams
I become the gull hovering,
on horizon's expanse.
With graceful balance
I will outstrip,
for failure will not
clip my wings.
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A contest entry
- About the ocean by Uglyblackdog.
450 points, ended June 3, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on winning gold.
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and applause
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Great job, congrats on the gold!!
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A very special write..combining rhythm with imagery..very vivid..transforming into a gull..
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