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Power of the stone

Energy can never be created or destoryed.

It is, always has been on a vibrational scale.

Each gem or stone emitts waves of healing.

Beryl gathers waves to bring us unity and love.

Empowered by our thoughts; healing it can bring.

Held in palm of hand, our energies connect and synergy released.

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  • RedAquarius
    June 11, 2008

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    Due to low turnout I will be canceling this contest. Thank you for your creative energy and effort, it is much appreciated.

    On a critique side - you do have a minor typo in line 1 and I'd consider revising either line 3 or line 5 as they are fairly repetitive (re: healing). In short poems, I find it hard to repeat ideas too close together - even just the use of a synonym can help. Good poem over all, just some minor tweaks.