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in a hell and not in heaven=========

If you are not
behaving with grace
and not expressing patience
while hearing others
and also
when you are branded as inhuman,
be sure that you are a living being
staying in a hell and not in heaven

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  • Dreamana
    May 31, 2008

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    Grace is God's behaviour towards humanity, so yes, we need to show it to fellow man.
    You have repeated some words in the last line 'staying in a in a hell'
    Ty for entering.